I always liked this description, which i first saw on your profile :)a really nice poem. im wondering if the word "growing" on the line before the last is really needed? because blossoming/growing might mean the same thing?i wish i can write stuff like this one day :).
Oh now i see why you used growing blossoming. it makes sense :)disregard my earlier suggestion :)
Thanks for the comment. I did think of budding and blossoming to replace "growing blossoming", but they dont bring out the essence of what I am trying to convey :-)
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