Saturday, May 12, 2007

About Me ...

This mystery I try to unravel,
Much have I yet to discover.
Everyday I endeavour,
My findings surprise myself.

Definite description of me,
Still a distant dream to me.
My growing blossoming soul admits
That verily is the true me.

3 comments:

Vandhiyathevan said...

I always liked this description, which i first saw on your profile :)

a really nice poem.

im wondering if the word "growing" on the line before the last is really needed? because blossoming/growing might mean the same thing?

i wish i can write stuff like this one day :).

Vandhiyathevan said...

Oh now i see why you used growing blossoming. it makes sense :)
disregard my earlier suggestion :)

இனியாழ் said...

Thanks for the comment. I did think of budding and blossoming to replace "growing blossoming", but they dont bring out the essence of what I am trying to convey :-)